Writing

WRITINGS

Writing #1

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I chose this for my first evidence because I had lot of mistakes in my first semester, and it's one of my first writings. I had problems with prepositions, with the verb to be and also with the "s" at the end of a verb, used in he she it.

Writing #2

  

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I chose this one because I used had lot of mistakes in my writings in first semester. In this writing I wrote about a chilaquiles competition that was organized in our school. As you can see I had troubles with past tenses, verbs, and punctuation.

Writing #3

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This was one of my last writings from second semester and my improvement can be seen.

In this semester I started to improve very well in my essays. In this essay I wrote about the money, if succeed can be gained by it.

Writing #4

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I chose this as my second evidence because it can be seen my improvement in the writings. And it's from second semester. In this writing I wrote and invented a fictional story, which was really scary. As you can see my mistakes are less, they're just vocabulary mistakes.

Writing #5

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As you can see in this writing I only have a few mistakes, such as commas and periods.  My improvement in the language can be seen, compared from what I had in first semester. In this writing my mistakes were not so many.